thisbluespirit: (smallbrain)
thisbluespirit ([personal profile] thisbluespirit) wrote2009-09-12 07:25 pm

Fic: UNIT: Stardust

Title UNIT: Stardust
Author: [livejournal.com profile] lost_spook
Rating: All Ages
Word Count: WIP
Characters: Sixth Doctor, Evelyn Smythe, the Master, Colonel Crichton, various OC 80s UNIT members.
Summary: October 1986: The Doctor and Evelyn arrive at UNIT just as the Colonel and his team are investigating the arrival of some mysterious aliens. Worse, the Doctor suspects a very familiar foe may be to blame.

Well, here we go again... I hope this works, what with juggling all these characters, but look! I wroted something with the Doctor actually in it. ;-)

Six and Evelyn, too, who are rather fun by themselves anyway. No Evil Torchwood this time, but the Master is nasty enough all by himself.

As usual, you'll need to patient until it appears on Teaspoon. (Well, you know, assuming everyone's not rolling their eyes and going "Not another of those UNIT fics...")

[identity profile] jjpor.livejournal.com 2009-09-12 10:34 pm (UTC)(link)
!! And it's up on the Teaspoon!

I might not manage to read this tonight, but I will endeavour to do so as soon as possible. Nat and Tilly and Sgt Kennedy! (And Colonel Crichton of course!). I'd totally have a Tilly/Kennedy icon for my lj too, if they, you know, existed outside of your fic. :-)
ext_3965: (6 with umbrella and TARDIS)

[identity profile] persiflage-1.livejournal.com 2009-09-13 05:29 am (UTC)(link)
Fun...

Beta-ish comment about one bit:

Dr Webber, who was UNIT’s current scientific advisor, only grinned back at his assistant, since his success rate with many of the other items that were in storage in the lab had either been minimal, or on occasion, disastrous, so he wasn’t about to let her dampen his pleasure at the achievement of mending this one.

Semi-colon not comma after "assistant", and you don't need that "so" after "disastrous" (if you read the sentence as starting from "Since his..." that should be clear).
ext_3965: (Brig and Liz)

[identity profile] persiflage-1.livejournal.com 2009-09-13 08:20 am (UTC)(link)
Considering how often I perpetrate involved sentences, I don't think I can comment! :D
ext_3965: (3 Liz Up Close)

[identity profile] persiflage-1.livejournal.com 2009-09-13 11:36 am (UTC)(link)
I split it into two sentences. Now the poor thing looks a bit less tortured by commas. ;-)

Fair enough!

I hadn't noticed, so you must be able to carry them off with style!

Very kind of you to say so!