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thisbluespirit ([personal profile] thisbluespirit) wrote2017-09-13 02:39 pm

Fic: One Good Fall (Deserves Another)

Fic! 500 Prompts fic; also for a bingo square! (AU meme fic 1 down, 10 pending, shhh. I wrote a thing, anyway.)

Title: One Good Fall (Deserves Another)
Author: [livejournal.com profile] lost_spook
Rating: PG
Word Count: 1766
Characters/Pairings: Fifth Doctor, Clara Oswald
Notes/Warnings: Also for [community profile] genprompt_bingo square "someone or something falls" and [community profile] hc_bingo square “falling.”
Summary: The Doctor finds himself hanging on for dear life yet again…

For [personal profile] romanajo123 in the 500 Prompts Meme: 020 Gaping chasm – Five & Clara.

Here at AO3 | at the Teaspoon.
persiflage_1: Pen and ink (Writer's Tools)

[personal profile] persiflage_1 2017-09-13 02:09 pm (UTC)(link)
Some beta-ish comments:

We were circling above in orbit for and I might possibly have pressed some buttons I shouldn’t have - you appear to be missing 1 or more words after 'orbit for'.

I fell from the sky like a shooting star, that how I like to put it - that's rather than that

He wished they’d thought about more in the ay of safety features - way not ay

were also likely to have been a good deal smaller than the two of them. - they before were also

even as she caught as his arm - at his not as his

All of sudden I’ve gone right off depths. - a before sudden

persiflage_1: The Fifteenth Doctor leaning out of the door of the TARDIS (Baby Deer & Daisies)

[personal profile] persiflage_1 2017-09-13 04:48 pm (UTC)(link)
Which one needs rephrasing?
persiflage_1: (Liz Shaw & Silver (S&S))

[personal profile] persiflage_1 2017-09-13 04:51 pm (UTC)(link)
😎😚
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[personal profile] romanajo123 2017-09-14 12:15 pm (UTC)(link)
I'd about forgotten I'd asked for this one. XD But this was good! it sounds like them.

(and I wonder... *which* Clara was this? o.o )